We really liked how you incorporated the audiences reaction.Your pictures were really good and you used the tools effectively.The only thing to work on is sentence structure.
slide #6 - could be elaborated more, it sounds really interesting! organization good photos, but could be more transparent like tie to Sara Moses, interesting thoughts there keep PTSD slides together, maybe? They seem very spread out and almost random.
Good use of the multimedia tools. The videos and visuals within the presentation were very good. Good job telling the message. Your presentation of Prisoner of Her Past was a bar setter.
On slides 8 and 9 you might want to change it from a specific persons opinion to critics in general. Everyone in the world does not know Harry and Kati. The final slides comparison between Sara and Sonia was quite insightful. Overall it was a very well done presentation.
We really liked how you incorporated the audiences reaction.Your pictures were really good and you used the tools effectively.The only thing to work on is sentence structure.
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good photos, but could be more transparent
like tie to Sara Moses, interesting thoughts there
keep PTSD slides together, maybe? They seem very spread out and almost random.
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Tyla and Reybren said....
ReplyDeleteGood use of the multimedia tools. The videos and visuals within the presentation were very good.
Good job telling the message. Your presentation of Prisoner of Her Past was a bar setter.
On slides 8 and 9 you might want to change it from a specific persons opinion to critics in general. Everyone in the world does not know Harry and Kati. The final slides comparison between Sara and Sonia was quite insightful. Overall it was a very well done presentation.
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